Narrative Story Creation- Feedback/ Advice wanted/ welcome

[Baron Quertier]

Hello all,
Im in the process of making a Narrative story video series using Age of Sail. Effectively its a Lets play series with a narrative from  the  point of view of the Captain in the game. Ive  uploaded  part one already and i think any advice or criticsm from the community would be greatly appreciated. Also if anyone would like to help or participate in  the  idea (voice acting, Historical, Naval Advice) please say. 

Here is  the first part for anyone  who might  be  interested 

 

Edited December 13, 2019 by Baron Quertier

[garritos]

good job on this man!  Something about an englishman's narration makes it all the better!  I like the narrative license you are taking with this!  

[Baron Quertier]

Thank you very much sir. I really appreciate you kind words

[Baron Quertier]

I have here episode 2, again if anyone would like to join me in this project, lending a voice, writing ideas or just advice in  general (historical or gameplay) please let me  know.
 

 

[D'Orleans]

Very well done sir! As I hadn't seen them before today it made for a nice Christmas gift. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you BQ! 

[Baron Quertier]

Here is  part 3 of the story, ive had several issues of various sorts throughout editting this one. Thoroughly enjoyed the storm mechanics and  spent the entire battle terrified that  my ships might capsize. Once again if you like to contribute in any way to the effort please let me know. Thank  you

 

Edited January 5, 2020 by Baron Quertier

[Baron Quertier]

Finally got round to uploading part 4. Been extremely busy lately with work. Hope you are all well

https://youtu.be/bzfNwTjndkc

Edited May 6, 2020 by Baron Quertier